Monday 17 June 2013

My Analogy Poem



The Concrete Factory
Our shift beings in the morning
And it doesn’t stop until evenings lurking.
Our foremen watch us toil away
While we’re tirelessly searching,
The questions always so far away.
The hallways take us to our station
We have no choice anyway,
We’re all in the same situation.
If we get sidetracked or lose our pace
Our bosses will be surely there
To put us workers in our place.


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 Peace out girl/boy scouts!

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